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 | Lily [97]  [18+] 5 dark tercets. Lotus and lilies are beautiful but rise out of muck. Are they rusalki?  |
| (4.5)   Hallo! This one showed up on read and review, and I smiled when I saw whose poem it was, since we were discussing reviewing yesterday on the newsfeed! Well - interesting thought, beautiful beings rising like flowers out of the muck. It is most likely a metaphor for (something else!  ) and it works well. The emotions come through and the 'language' is in keeping with the character.My favourite bit is about not judging. I think nobody should judge anyone except in very rare circumstances. I can't comment on the poetry form since I'm not familiar with it! Just that it works to give your message! Write On! - Sonali PS: I had to look up two words in your brief description!  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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