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 Lily [97]  [18+]
5 dark tercets. Lotus and lilies are beautiful but rise out of muck. Are they rusalki?
by ผีKåreEngaในMontana
Review of Lily [97]  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hallo!
This one showed up on read and review, and I smiled when I saw whose poem it was, since we were discussing reviewing yesterday on the newsfeed!

Well - interesting thought, beautiful beings rising like flowers out of the muck. It is most likely a metaphor for (something else! *Wink*) and it works well. The emotions come through and the 'language' is in keeping with the character.

My favourite bit is about not judging. I think nobody should judge anyone except in very rare circumstances.

I can't comment on the poetry form since I'm not familiar with it! Just that it works to give your message!


Write On!
- Sonali

PS: I had to look up two words in your brief description!

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