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 Heaven  [E]
Where is heaven? Perhaps you're there.
by D.L. Robinson
Review of Heaven  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hallo!
I like the idea of Heaven being everywhere! Heaven is within each of us and in nature and you've brought this out beautifully.

The title, brief description and genres work well. An extra shout-out to you for the layout, with centering and blue typeface.

Comments:
1. Maybe you'd like to look at the rhyme scheme, since it isn't standard through the verses.
2. The line on 'nose' made me think of someone with a cold! *Ha*
3. I'm not quite sure how to interpret the last verse.

Thanks for sharing this poem!
Happy WDC Anniversary!
- Sonali


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