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 Review #4737278 |
 | Storm Music  [E] sometimes the music changes, or how we hear it, does.  |
| (5.0)  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEMThe poem tells a story through weather and storms that mirror the highs and lows of our own life.  WHAT I LIKEDI loved the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem. I felt like I went a journey and discovered my own weathered traveled life.  STRUCTUREThis is free form poem. There was no set rythme scheme. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "Rainbows ribboned across sunlit skies" Great visual with succinct wording. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSI have no suggestions for improvement. The title fits the poem well. A great read that challenges the reader to take time and reflect, leaving one on a positive note.    HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews"  
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You responded to this review 03/16/2024 @ 6:46am EDT