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 | Comments on "The Master"  [18+] Comments on Paul Thomas Anderson's "The Master"  |
| An Angel Army Review Hi Max Griffin 🏳️🌈 which I found on the Read & Review feature. I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Comments on "The Master"" . I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.  Overall Impression. I noted you wrote your review of "The Master" in 2012. Somehow I missed this movie showing in theaters. (Though, in fairness, I was undergoing a divorce and moving on with life and work at that time--no time for the finer things in life for me.)Your review piqued my interest. I will try to find it on a streaming service, although this is not a movie my current wife will find interesting or watch with me. Perhaps it's the movie subject, but I found your writing to be rather intense. Phrasing like: That's one reason the movie is painful: it's so real. Its reality pierces your soul like the fangs of a venomous, psychic serpent. Please don't get me wrong--I find your style to be both honest and captivating. I wanted to read more. You remind me of a very good friend, a retired History teacher, who frequently attends new movies showing and provides in-depth, frank reviews on Facebook. I look forward to reading his take. Frankly, I think it rather scary how much Dodd's principles (if that's what they really are) mirror what's happening today.  Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc. I found no issues to mention here.  My Rating. Rating not requested; none provided.  Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.Reviewed by JACE   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 03/14/2024 @ 10:41am EDT