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Hi, My name is Kristina (kb6vas), and I came across your story Broken Reality in the Review Requests. This story is terrific.

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What I Liked


You captured my attention at the very beginning and held it throughout the entire story. You kept me on a roller coaster ride with the rising and easing of anxiety. Your storyline was good. I liked the flashbacks. They held the eeriness throughout the story.

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Suggestions


I cannot offer suggestions for improvement because I don't feel they are warranted. You did an excellent job, and the story was well-written.

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Parting Comments


Keep up the excellent work, and write on!

I will be looking for this story come Christmas 2024. Perfect Choice.


Kristina

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