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#1565040 by Annette


Wow!
I'm not sure what I was expecting when I read the title, but it wasn't this! *Smile* I guess the word 'kingdom' can conjure up a lot of images on its own. I was more clued in to what the poem was about when I read the brief description and saw the genres.

I love the poem itself. The rhyme scheme and verse structure take the reader through the verses smoothly. And I actually got two messages from it - 'be adventurous' and 'be grateful for what you have'. Though it's lighthearted and seemingly about mice, it can apply to many areas of our lives.

My only suggestion would be for some WritingML like font, size, line-space and maybe colour.

Write On!
- Sonali

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