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An Angel Army Review Hi Colby Parson ![]() I'm JACE ![]() ![]() I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story. ![]() Was there a contest or prompt that limited the number of words you could have? Is this the start of an actual longer story that you plan in the future? Your item description is not much help. What is the Observation series? The description should really entice your reader to read your offering. All that said, it really does speak to the current nature of social media. I often wonder why I remain on it. Oh yeah, I joined at the request of my wife. I've noted that since I joined FB, I'm much more cynical -- much like those 25, perhaps. ![]() ![]() ![]() Reviewed by JACE ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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