Hello Kit !

This dramatic poem of yours was featured in my "read & review" area and I enjoyed it, so I'm here to do your review. I hope you enjoy it and find it encouraging and uplifting.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I loved your dramatic emotional poem! Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I could really feel your emotion throughout the whole poem. Well done!


I can't imagine you could have written such an emotionally deep grief poem without having experienced it yourself, so my heart goes out to you on your loss.


This was my favorite part of your dramatic poem: "as a reluctant waking
from a blissful dream." I could relate so much to that. When we dream pleasantly about lost loved ones we sure don't want the dream to end. Well done!


You did a great job with the free verse form in this poem. Well done!


I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem. Well done!


Your poem was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and soul, and made me want to read your next one. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's perfect as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a lovely writing style and I enjoyed reading your emotional drama poem. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler









A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 





My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .