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 |  | Carly's Guestbook  [13+] A Place to come and introduce yourself, ask questions, request a review or just say 'hi'.  |
| (5.0)| Hi 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  I am reviewing your guest book, "Carly's Guestbook" , in affiliation with "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .Please remember these are purely my own opinions, and any advice given is done so with the sole purpose of being helpful.  What I liked: The picture of Winnie the Pooh and Piglet at the top of your guest book page drew me in straight away. I am a big fan of Pooh and friends, so seeing this made me very happy. I am sure anyone who saw this would be drawn to your guest book. I think a guest book is a great way to get to know our fellow writers, and your book is no exception to that. Your introduction is both informative and interesting. However, I think it was probably written a few years ago, and it would be great to read an up-to-date version. To learn about Carly the Moderator who has been writing for many years. I like how the items you have chosen to highlight are laid out. They are clear and enticing. I particularly like how you have noted your favourite item. I can see a few people have stopped by your guest book and left you a note recently. It would be lovely if more could pay you a visit now that your anniversary is approaching. Suggestions: Under the heading "Some Of My Favourite Places" you have linked an item. I assume this is to an item in someone else's portfolio. However, it shows as an invalid item, so I guess they have probably deleted it. Maybe change that for an activity or contest you like to participate in now. The other thing (which is a tiny detail) is that your introduction to yourself is not as eye catching as it could be. You have something interesting to say, and you are, in effect, selling yourself and your portfolio, so I would give it some colour, maybe change the font, make it bigger. Something that grabs your reader the moment they click on this item. Parting Comments: Thanking for sharing some of yourself in this guest book. I have thoroughly enjoyed my visit. Happy anniversary! Choconut 
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