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What a lovely poem! The title, brief description, genres and layout work well. The soothing tone echoes your mood as you recall life at Foxtail Lane.

I like the orange of your text - for the orange of the tail! The tale and tail are the same colour! *Smile*

I specially appreciate how the foxes are friends of humans, and take care of them. This idea of being in harmony with nature is so necessary in a world where human beings feel entitled and are at odds with other earth dwellers.

I have no suggestions for improvement, it works as it is.

Write On!
Thank you Kiya, for creating it, and Secret Squirrel, for gifting it to me!
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