I thought this was a fantastic poem. I love the subject matter, and the language was both sophisticated and evocative which matched my expectations for what a poem about black holes would read like. I also absolutely loved the fact that you increased the kerning and stretched out the word "spaghettified" so that the word itself became an embodiment of the concept. That was a really smart way to add some variety and uniqueness to the poem. Well done!

I don't have any suggestions for improvement. And based on the fact that this piece apparently won first place (and a trophy!) for the contest in which it was entered, it sounds like I'm not alone in thinking it's great just the way it is!

This was an excellent poem about a really interesting topic. Well done!