Hallo!
I visited your portfolio because your WDC anniversary is coming up.
The title, cover pic, brief description and genres work. A special thank you for the easy to read layout.
The poem is beautiful. The rhyme scheme and verse structure work to tell of a lovely relationship. Ordinarily, I would've remarked on the same-word-rhyme ('you', 'you') but somehow in this poem it didn't jar me.
The last verse left me wondering if it was a dream or you were describing reality in the guise of a dream. Is this deliberately meant to be open to interpretation?
Thanks for sharing this poem!
Write On! Dream On!
Sonali
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