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Dream  [E]
The dream of a life time.
by Bikerider
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§amaCabre


Hallo!
I visited your portfolio because your WDC anniversary is coming up.

The title, cover pic, brief description and genres work. A special thank you for the easy to read layout.

The poem is beautiful. The rhyme scheme and verse structure work to tell of a lovely relationship. Ordinarily, I would've remarked on the same-word-rhyme ('you', 'you') but somehow in this poem it didn't jar me.

The last verse left me wondering if it was a dream or you were describing reality in the guise of a dream. Is this deliberately meant to be open to interpretation?

Thanks for sharing this poem!
Write On! Dream On!
Sonali

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