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 The Mousetrap Story Open in new Window. [E]
Why is that mousetrap in a coffee can in a suitcase?
by ~LadyBee~ Author Icon
Review by SandraLynn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I'm still laughing! Of course this incident of airport security would happen when the character was running late and very preoccupied. Who does give the contents of their luggage a second thought? Packing is but one step of many in the travel process. What a clever and practical addiction cure created by a ten-year old. I for one, however, would not relish poking my hand into that coffee can. Just a suggestion: in a few places you wrote the word 'to' and it should be 'too'. As in "the humor in the situation is too much." As in "too much coffee." Oh, and it's a " voice says." Thanks for sharing.
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