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 Chili By Candlelight Open in new Window. [13+]
A young married couple have an explosive evening, in more ways than one.
by Sophurky Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings and happy account anniversary month!

Good grief, this was hilarious, heartwarming and so relatable. I know how it feels to be a total witch in a bad mood and make everyone around me miserable. I’m glad the husband was so patient and supportive (or just plain scared*Laugh*)

You incorporated the quotes smoothly, and since I never heard of any of them, it all went right over my head quite well. Your characters are well portrayed and amusing, and the story is rapid and rollicking. (Have you ever read Jack Prelutsky’s The Turkey Shot Out of the Oven?)

Overall I have nothing to offer except to use size 4 Verdana font, and to add a third genre such as “Family” rather than “Contest.”

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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