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Review #4734535
Viewing a review of:
Blogocentric Formulations Open in new Window. [18+]
My primary Writing.com blog.
by Jeff Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Is It Over Now?" Open in new Window.
Review by JayNaNoOhNo Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with I Write  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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This is an "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. review!


Hello, Jeff! Thank you for supporting this great activity!

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
I, too, know the feeling of the Spotify wrap-up reminding you that you have thousands of songs to choose from, but you really only listen to 20 of them. And of those 20, at least 5 barely made the cut.

*Checkb*Title and Description:
I like how you tied your final song choice to the final entry. It was a nice touch.

"My primary writing.com blog" doesn't really tell us very much. I'm actually surprised you don't have a dedicated "The Soundtrack of Your Life" Open in new Window. blog to keep tabs on how your interests change from year to year. You know, if you're into that sort of data tracking thing.

*Checkb*Content and Flow:
This was a nice, straightforward entry, and I'm sure TSwift will be thrilled to make another red carpet appearance in your blog.

What interested me more than the amount of times you've listened to her songs (and I'm very jealous you got to see the concert), is that you said you left out all the contemporary Christian music this year. How come? If it's the stuff you listened to the most often, it certainly deserves a spot in the blog. Have you considered doing an entire set of those songs (maybe not for SOYL, but another Soundtrackers activity?). I know it's always hard to narrow down entries to only a handful of music, but maybe it's something to consider.

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
I found no problems.

*Checkb*Final Thoughts:
Congratulations on finishing Soundtrackers and creating some consistent writing habits. It's great to see you getting back into the swing of things.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

JayNaNoOhNo Author Icon*Smile*

My approach to reviews: "I'll Explain, but not Disclaim" Open in new Window.



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