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 Pushing Time Open in new Window. [E]
We always think we have enough time, for whatever we need to fix. Don't let time slip.
by jayesandz Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I've read some others of your works, and I think they're built around the same theme of family reconciliation. This is most likely something deeply personal for you, and I'm proud of you for sharing your feelings with us in the hopes that we don't make the same mistakes with our own lives and closest relatives.

I see nothing in this poem to criticize: you have three genres, large font, centered text, and the writing flows well and conveys a heartfelt message. In the second line, the word "text" should probably be pluralized, but that's the only suggestion I have.

A line count is always recommended in case you wish to enter your poetry into contests; it's good to get into the habit of counting your lines (and words of stories) and listing them within the item, so you don't forget it when you're required to.

If I were you I would enter this into a couple of contests around here. Let me fetch the links:
"Fox's Socks Newbie Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. is for newbies, and so is "The Newbie Poetry Award" Open in new Window.. But watch out for prompts: I'm not sure if you can enter items previously written in these or if they have to be written to specific guidelines.
But there's always "First and Second Chance Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. that takes any poetry at all.

Take care, thanks for sharing, best of luck if you decide to enter any of the contests, and keep writing *Smile* *Heartb*


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