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Trading off bits of yourself
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Interesting poem. It has a lot to say. It could be said in a smoother way. The rhymes are good and well understood but the rhythm was jarring it didn't quite fit for me maybe I accented the syllables wrong. I like the message though it does approach it from a negative POV.
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