Nice Poem. I couldn't help thinking but think of Lady Gaga's Just dance when I was reading this. First off I love the writing ML used for this colorful and eye catching. There is some beautiful imagery in this poem often highlighted by the colors (i.e. the blossomed floor and rays by the bed, the shiny blue teacup). I liked the "and they will say..." refrains in this. The word choices in this were really excellent.

This feels proud, defiant and energetic. It made me want to stand tall and dance myself.




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