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Review #4733106
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 Twas the Night Before NaNo 2017  [E]
written for Keystone
by Mummsy
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Mummsy !

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I forget how I originally came upon this fantasy poem of yours, but I liked it and popped it into my February to-review list so I read it again today and hope you enjoy this review.



INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
*Bulletg* I thought your poem was fun and creative! Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletg* You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done! *Clap*



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* I loved that you set it to the tune / rhythm of "The Night Before Christmas." It made it even more fun for me to read. Well done! *Clap*


*Bulleto* My favorite two lines were these: "The candy was now in a place hard to find,
In hopes that out of sight might be out of mind." They made me chuckle. And salute you. Most people would just give NaNoWriMo as a perfectly "valid" reason to pig out on junky food and candy. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* Kudos on even attempting NaNo! It's a fantastic challenge. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* Your NaNoWriMo book sounded interesting to me. Did you finish it? Is it published here or somewhere else if you did?

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your fantasy poem. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* Your NaNo poem was interesting to me, felt fun to read, and made me want to read your next one. Well done! *Clap*



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's great as it is. Well done! *Clap*



CONCLUSION:
*Bulletv* You have a nice writing style and sense of humor and I enjoyed reading your NaNo fantasy poem. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, fun spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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