Greetings sindbad !

This review is part of "A Week of Port Raid Package" from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon"  gifted to you by your Secret Valentine. I hope you'll find this review as helpful, inspiring and encouraging.

This poem transcends the conventional, romantic sense of love. It presents love as a fundamental force for creation, akin to a "first movement" emanating from emptiness. This expansive definition invites diverse interpretations, from mystical perspectives to philosophical examinations of existence.

The poem employs potent symbols like "mother" and "birth" to link love to the very origin of the universe. This elevates love to a cosmic level, suggesting its inherent power and interconnectedness with all that exists.

The notion of "emptiness" being the source of love is inherently paradoxical. This paradox sparks curiosity and challenges preconceived notions. Does emptiness represent potential, the absence of limitation, or a state beyond our usual understanding? The poem leaves space for individual contemplation.

The final line carries a poignant message. It suggests that human disconnection from our inner selves, the "source of love," hinders our ability to experience true love. This message resonates with contemporary concerns about alienation and disconnection in a technologically driven world.

The brevity of your piece serves as an invitation. It urges us to look inward, reconnect with our core selves, and rediscover the boundless love that resides within. This self-discovery potentially leads to greater authenticity, deeper connections, and a more fulfilling existence.

Overall, this is a beautiful piece about love. Thank you for sharing this to us. Keep your creativity flow and continue to inspire everyone around. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic