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 Promises Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. A kid loses things and don't know what they did with it. They fed it to Pippi. Cute. Who was Pippi? I smiled at this. Well rounded characters and suitable diaolgue. This made me smile. A good style and entertaining. Always: Megan
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