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I read this yesterday before it had a review... I was going to review it, but life, y'know. Anyway, I see you added a little more at the end since then.

A really cool story that piques our interest in a post apocalyptic world. I like your writing style; when I first started reading I wasn't sure if it would be dark and gritty (descriptions of bodies blown open and all that) but it's written lightly with a touch of humor.

The sci-fi concept of a nuclear explosion creating a new form of life out of what has been destroyed is creative; I'm not too big on sci-fi, but I think it's unique among the other concepts.

Your characters are amusing, as they find themselves in Antarctica under such peculiar circumstances.

A few questions come to mind, such as: are the people in Antarctica the last surviving humans? Did you really mean to say "eighty percent" of land is still inhabitable? And of course, what will become of everyone and will there be a "happy" ending of some kind, a satisfying resolution...

I don't see any errors to correct; I'm assuming the lack of quotation marks around the dialogue at the end (within the conscious cloud) are a quirk of emphasizing the oddity of what's happening.

I would recommend using a large font size; on mobile I'm not sure what size you've used, but I prefer 3.5 or 4 rather than the default.

Also, your dialogue that is set in quotation marks needs to be spaced.

Looking forward to hearing more about this situation you've created.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .