Season’s greetings,

This was a good read. I’m happy that you were able to handle the challenging situation well. It’s an inspiration for those of us who are terrified of public speaking - or even of speaking in general

I would suggest choosing a larger font size for your text; I like to use size 3.5 or 4 myself. It makes the story feel more engaging and is also easier to read for elderly people or those with poor eyesight.

Being as this is a personal story, I have a hard time making any suggestions for improvement in the way I might with fiction, because it’s your voice and you can say it how you please.

Perhaps the first sentence could be restructured to introduce the situation in a more clear way, but we understand quickly enough what’s going on, and when the sentence repeats at the end it ties together in a satisfying way.

I don’t see any serious grammar issues or typos. Your voice comes through with sincerity and simplicity.

You can offset the notes at the beginning and end in a smaller size font so the presentation is tidier.

Thank you for sharing, take care and keep writing

"The WDC Angel Army" 

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