Hi Twiga

This ABC challenge was an interesting one to take on, and you did it very well. I liked the way you painted a picture of a woman that all the others wanted to be like.

It was distracting from the story, however, that there were unnecessary capitalizations of words. It was puzzling and made me stop to question each instance. eg. 'A Human is an Animal', ought to be 'A human is an animal'.

I enjoyed the sarcastic dig from the priest near the end of the tale. And then your twist, hints of some vile activity. Morbid curiosity had me wondering for more details of what she really got up to, but I suppose you had run out of alphabet letters to detail any more!

Write on!

Hope