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 I am Tex the T-Rex  Open in new Window. [E]
This is a children's book I’m currently in the making.
by xyxe Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Dear xyxe Author Icon,

I commed you on your desire to produce a book of children's literature with the use of your poetry, offering on the WDC reviewing pages. I might have some useful suggestions for the lay out of the children’s book notion, ‘I Am Tex the T-Rex'.

For the layout of a children’s book in poetic fashion, I focused mainly on structure, development and content, and would suggest bring this all together to get published.

Breaking it down:
Title: I am Tex the T-Rex

Page 1: T t, Tex. That’s my name. What am i? I’m a T-Rex.

Page 2: I’m big, I’m scary, and I shout out loud. Come on do it with me, let’s go, RAWR! RAWR!! RAWR!!!

Page 3: I have one long tail, and two big feet. two small hands…and I like to eat.

Page 4: I like to eat meat. one in each claw.
I put it in my mouth, my mouth is called a maw.

Page 5: I have many teeth, To eat my food.
Chomp chomp chomp! that’s how I chew.

Page 6: Tex the T-Rex. that is who I am. It was very nice to meet you. I hope to see you again.

It's nicely done. Your children's book idea "I am Tex the T-Rex" has potential. Here are three suggestions to bring it together for publishing:

Structure: Consider a more consistent rhyme scheme and rhythm throughout the book. This will make it more engaging for young readers. For example, you can follow an AABB or ABAB rhyme scheme for each page.

Development: Expand on Tex's adventures or encounters. Create a storyline that allows young readers to follow Tex on an exciting journey or adventure. This will add depth to the character and keep children engaged throughout the book.

Content: Infuse educational elements. Since this is a children's book, you can incorporate fun facts about T-Rexes or the prehistoric world in a playful and informative way. This will not only entertain but also educate young readers.

To bring it all together for publishing, ensure the book maintains a consistent tone and style throughout, making it suitable for its target age group. Additionally, consider including colorful and captivating illustrations that complement the text and help tell Tex's story visually. Finding a good illustrator is essential.

Engaging a skilled illustrator is a key step in making your book visually appealing to children. Also, suggest that you research the children's book publishing market, identify potential publishers or self-publishing options, and prepare a polished manuscript and proposal to pitch your book effectively.

I hope all of this helps. It's a pleasure to consider for feeback and hopefully illuminate the possibilties of your writing in this format.

Best Wishes,

Brian
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