Hi,

there is a new angle to this ghost story. I can't call her a ghost either because she behaved with goodness. Calling her a good soul might be more appropriate.

I notice she word black and not white.
Could there be reason for this attire?

Here she comes walking on the cloudy path from the moon to give a floral tribute to her recently passed lover.

It is a lovely thought, showing a heavenly gesture from a dead soul.

The first line is truly a hook.

"The lady in black stepped through the mist and appeared in the cemetery."

My thoughts and a doubt-

It is sensible that she has no conversation with her erstwhile lover. Yet, she came down to place a rose on his grave. There is human emotion attached to this gesture. She even gave a kiss to his headstone.

So what stops her from acknowledging his soul, which just rose from his grave?
They could have gone together into the night through the mist.



The above are just my thought.

Language and style are above the top.

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