Hi Novice Author,
Congratulations on getting your first item added to your portfolio here. I discovered it though the Read & Review link.

Your write clearly, your sentences have a good flow, and it is easy to understand. There does seem to be some repeating of information, however, which mentally dulls the edge on the finer points.

I'd like to suggest that you try breaking into quotes of Bob or Julie speaking, to enliven the article more.

Or, as it's written as a past tense accounting, you might add in some of the classes reactions to what they were learning. For instance, when Bob revealed that wearing niqab or burka would be good for men also - surely there was some surprise expressed! :D You surprised me at that point, in fact, I think that was my favorite part.

I hope you enjoy your time here at WDC


Hope