You have several good points about the main topic. Yes, change is vital for progress. No wonder they say, change is the law of life.

Here are a few edits if you like-

"So many people think this but now I will tell you what I think."
(So many people think like this. But now I will tell you what I think.)
Split a long sentence for more clarity.

"man kind."
(mankind)

"Without change we would go basically insane and no I don't mean what you think I mean insane means when you do something over and over again expecting a different result except without change it would always be the same and we're all basically going insane at that point."

The above one too long a sentence in which meaning is lost. Please split it into more sentences.

"your hole life."
(your whole life.)

Your last sentence has logic. But it got lost due to the length of the sentence. Writing needs more clarity.

Punctuation-
Comma and period should me inserted where necessary.

Please divide the whole essay into paragraphs, each with a point of its own.

Write on!




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