It is good to see you here on WdC, welcome.

Someone once said, "Truth is stranger than fiction."

You wrote a great story. I could hear and visualize the tickling and laughter. Your mother's unexpected entrance must have given you something close to heart failure. Why did you and your friend have a tickling session?

I have some genres to suggest because adding them to the category will help potential readers find your story. Action/adventure is part of your story because everyone was active, the three of you had an adventure you didn't expect, and I can see through your words enough emotions were involved in the story. biographical will work because it is about you and what happens to you, drama because it was a dramatic experience and possibly more to think about using.

You can eliminate [and because of that]. Starting a new sentence About not hearing her mom coming home would make it more powerful/have more strength.

Sometimes rereading a story, days, weeks, or longer after writing it will help the writer find places that need changing, re-arranging, eliminating, or other edits.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .