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 | To Go Forth Into the Light  [ASR] A Frenchman in Victorian London searches for the secret of immortality.  |
| (4.0)| Hello Graywriter This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with.   Good story. It opens with a strong beginning, keeping the reader's attention, has an interesting middle that urges the reader to read on, and has a surprise ending I didn't see coming. Nice job. Title and Description - Good title and description that draws attention and gives a great synopsis of the story. Theme/Subject Matter:- It's the story of a human's need/want to live an immortal life. Will his long search for this gift of immortality find him, or will something more sinister? Characters - The reader gets a good, well-rounded picture of the personality of the main character. Well done. Originality/Creativity:- It's a creative spin on a tale as old as mankind. The desire to live forever. Setting - I was easily able to visualize each scene as I read. My Suggestions - Lane and stealLane, and steal  d'Auteur's efforts, fish-monger.fishmonger. At last, judgementjudgment  throat and fearthroat, and fear milleniamillennia  kidneys, damagedkidneys, and damaged  Summary: Thanks so much for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it. KEEP ON WRITING ON!  Intuey  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/21/2023 @ 12:30pm EDT