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Love (And Other Myths) Open in new Window. [E]
"Into the arms of love I fall"... An Endings are the New Beginnings Entry
by 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I enjoyed reading your poem because the words married well together and worked smoothly, and told the story of "love" of the mind more than the heart but in the end emphasized that love is in the heart and from the heart. I agree with the idea that love is being molested because of the commercial uses for promoting many things in this day and age.

I noticed you used other as one of the genres and had an option of adding a third. Potential readers will be able to find your poem better when you add two more genre options. [Emotional] works because love evokes emotion. Experience will work because this is an emotion someone experiences. [Personal] and [relationship] could work for this poem also.

When you used {love was a prize} did you mean it is not anymore, or did you mean it is misused?

I had to look up [banal] because it is a word I did not know about. Would you please consider creating a drop note for the definition of this word so that readers who do not know its meaning can stay in your poem and not need to search for the meaning.


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