Diana's reverie is absorbing as I read through the story.

It is certainly like fairy tale romance that continues to be so as she went ahead to join Jared and her little son.

The flames and the tragic deaths are quite sudden and all good things came to a sudden end leaving her caught in the gyres of tragedy.

I enjoyed the narration.

My only doubt is about the flames, which she saw.

You said.
"...saw flames that stretched toward the base of heaven itself."

If the flames are that high, there must be smoke emanating from them and spreading around and down the hill as well.
But we don't see a spec of it as she drove up the hill, neither do we hear the sound of two explosions.

Also, it is odd that no other houses are mentioned besides this one lonely one.

These are just my thoughts not meant to offend.

Have a wonderful WDC Account Anniversary!

Write on!






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