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 Confessional Lies Open in new Window. [18+]
A girl has trouble coming clean during confession.
by Schnujo's Doing NaNoWriMo? Author Icon
Review of Confessional Lies  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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This is quite a confession for sure because of the interesting twist you told about the relationship between the priest and confessor, the activities, and the people involved. This could perhaps become a screenplay for a TV show.

You could add some other genres: instead of contest entry, perhaps spiritual, mystery because there is much that hasn't been explained, drams, emotional because the experiences do elicit emotions, and possibly use other genres.

I got the general idea, but am interested in knowing more about the characters and the events. I hope you will be able to add to this story.


Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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