Your story is heartfelt to me. I could feel the emotions of this story through your words, see in my mind the actions of you and Linda, and understand the losses you and Linda experienced.

It is your story about your friend which is why I suggest you consider changing the title or at least add a little more to include Linda and you.

I also feel that more added or a change should be made to the description because your story is more than the fact that Linda would not give up.

You could bring more life and emotions to this special story of you and Linda by explaining how you and Linda felt and reacted to the different events.

I could see you and Linda, imagine the environment, and feel the emotions of your story.

I'm glad you were able to write this story, visit with Linda, and during the hospice visit act out the adventure both of your planned and were not able to live together. This is a nice tribute to your friend.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .