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You wrote a complex poem of love too soon revealed so it seems. I could invision the scene and action of this interwoven story of what seems to be a misguided romance, or possibly a romance evoked too early that became a fright for one or both parties involved.

I noticed you could add, romance, possibly mystery, adventure even though it is a misguided romantic adventure, thriller because the mysteries of a romantic life can be thrilling, or some other genre that would help WdC members find your poem and read and review it, and possibly submit it to the Quills.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .