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 What is True love?  [E]
Are we all able to answer this question? No matter our age, our experiences, we can try.
by Jiji
Review by jaya
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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The theme is good. It is an age-old dilemma, which still invites definitions.
As you have rightly concluded, individuals have to decide for themselves what true love is.

In my opinion, true love cannot be decided at the beginning of a relationship. It has to go through the test of time and if they still find each other irresistible, if their love doesn't alter through thick and thin of life, yes, then it is true love.

Here are a few edits if you like.


Edit-

"I will answer to this question without being ...."
(I will answer this question without being ...)

"that ae symbolic and people."
(that are symbolic and people.)

"loosing"
(losing)

"It is a dangerous game many of whom are people who got lost.'
(Rephrase the sentence for clarity.)

"if we participate to this game."
(if we participate in this game.)

"Althought "
(Although)

"if your body express"
(if your body expresses)


Write on!
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