I like your title. I like your description. They are both in alignment with your poem.

I like the movement of the first verse as it introduces life's constant shift, then slaps two bookends on it with the last statement, "Each one, a unique chapter to live." I don't know if you meant to do that but I like it.

Likewise, I liked the message in the second verse:
"The shadows of yesterday,
Dissipate as dawn's light takes its place,
Today, I am renewed with each daybreak." . . . As I read this I can take it both literally and metaphorically, and I like that.

Ahhh, here comes the struggle:
"a future to borrow, . . . I can't agree that my future is borrowed because if it is, it is not mine to live, for it belongs to someone else. And, I shant take that position in MY life. A gift, yes! Borrowed, no!

Suggestion: consider the reality of the following line and whether or not you believe it possible, "New experiences to embrace without sorrow.". . . I mean can anyone, anywhere embrace ALL new experiences without sorrow? To me, that suggests that I will never lose or regret or make another mistake . . . and that is not possible in the school of life.

Those two lines aside, I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it.

Suggestion: I think your poem fits in the spiritual genre, as well as the two you have chosen. Consider adding it to that genre, too.

Live and write passionately,
Cyndee


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