This is such a great poem. You're a good poet! I love ladybugs also. One time I moved into a house that was in the country. One of the second-story bedrooms had at least fifty ladybugs climbing on the inside of the window, trying to get out. I opened the window (I could only open it a little, without hurting them. I must have spent an hour or more getting them all out into the fresh air, It made me feel good. (Them too, I'm sure ).
Title and Description - I love the title. It definitely drew me in. Then when I read you were five when you first wrote it. Impressive. I'm sure you've edited it a few times since because it's really good and fun to read.
Theme/Subject Matter:- The writer shows his love for ladybugs, and tells of his encounter with a lot of them on the beach.
Characters - The reader is able to sense the kindness of the writer.
Emotion/Impact: - The poem made me smile. It was a fun read that left me feeling happy. Nice job!!
Summary: I enjoyed reading your piece. Thanks so much for sharing. I hope to read more poetry from you soon.
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