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Virus Open in new Window. [13+]
Only one of us will make it out alive, and it's not you.
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Review by Cat Voleur Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Amethyst Snow Angel Author Icon


I found your item "Virus" Open in new Window. through the read and review tool.

I liked this a lot. The pacing was very even, both of the characters were compelling, and you developed a rich sense of both atmosphere and history without bogging the story down too much with exposition. All in all, I think it was very well done.

I did feel like it was the opening chapter to a longer story. Not that the piece didn't resolve itself, it just felt like there was a lot left to the tale that we never got to see. This is probably because you set it up so well.

I really enjoyed this piece, and I hope I get to read more from you in the future.

All the best,



-Cat


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