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 Beyond Writing and Accolades Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about how emotions got the best of me that time.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Review by Monty Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This poem tells it like is I take it and I do not blame you for things getting the best of you if your poem was inspired by any true lines that by the way were in excellent rhyme. The rhythm I caught as as your pride took a walk. and the picture I could see with words of good imagery. I noted no errors
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