Making Friends [E] My Candidate/Partner poem for Rising Stars. |
I like the idea of writing together About friends in all types of weather 'Coz it's a friendly thing to do So you prove that what you say is true! Things are better with a friend Happiness begins, sorrow does end. You can share things and secrets Knowing there'll be no regrets. I like the way you've displayed it Colour-coded, blue-n-orange shaded. That way we know whom to quote 'Coz we know which lines each of you wrote. The two of you are nicely in synch Though each style is quite distinct The tone, description, the word choice Points at each distinct voice Yet when you read them together They're birds of a feather They fly as one, and make a whole Which is satisfying to the soul! So thank you for this verse you penned Two colours, two styles did blend Giving the reader a poetic treat Which I think is pretty neat! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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