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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I visited your portfolio because it's your WDC Account Anniversary. The title intrigued me and I clicked. The brief description and genres work.

The poem is quite unique in that it begins with some predictable statements - and then goes on to some unexpected ones. I found myself re-reading the surprise ones and smiling. It might not be the way I thought it would go, but it made some sense!

The last line left me a bit confused. Who is the 'you' and what is the other chance? I wonder if I'm missing something here!

Thanks for sharing this one.
Write On!
- Sonali

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