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The title, cover photo and genres work. I'm not sure if the brief description means what I think it means. *Confused* I'm wondering why you've classified this as 'prose', isn't it meant to be a poem?

Wow - what a powerful poem. I'm not sure what I was expecting, but this came as a surprise and blew me away. The 'adornment' (not sure if that's the correct term!) of the person with the twisted gems of negativity made for a potent image. The melding of the concrete and the abstract is also well done. The last two lines tone down the negativity to empathy and pity.

No suggestions for improvement - great job! *Thumbsupl*
- Sonali

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