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What a lovely poem!
The title, brief description and genre chosen work for the poem. The verse structure and words chosen give a soothing, uplifting tone. The poem is sincere and true, straight from the heart.

I like the comparison of the renewal of faith to the renewal of life in nature. I appreciate how you extend that to the new beginning after a mistake has been made and corrected.

I must admit that I'm not familiar with the entire context. I've heard the name Mary Magdalene but I'll have to look up the reference.

My suggestion would be for WritingML - font, size, center, line-space and maybe italics.
Also, in addition to 'spiritual' maybe 'inspirational' and 'community' as genres.

Thanks for sharing this poem!
- Sonali

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