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Review #4675186
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 The Ballad of Aurora and Cisco Open in new Window. [E]
A Ballad (week 28) about my grand-daughter and her cat.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Looking for Sr. Mod items to review
Comes across a ballad - wow
Starts reading of feline (Meow, Meow).

The tale's going strong
Laughter's building up
Young girl treating a kitty
Like a frolicsome pup

The mother enters the picture
Complete with camera
And I'm all set to say,
"Watch it, Mamma!"

And then, oh oh,
There's just a chorus
I guess the rest is open
To interpretation for us.

The funniest home video
Whatever it means to you
You're supposed to
Use your imagination, do.

While this is valid
I can't disagree
Somehow it didn't quite
Work for me.

I wanted to know
exactly what happened
To girl, kitty, Mamma
Were wits dulled and claws sharpened?

I must add I appreciate
the note
That you put at the end for
the aspiring poet.

I learn a lot about poetry forms
When poets, as notes, do spell out the norms.
So thanks for doing some of that
In this poem about a girl's cat.

The title and brief description are good
Add 'pets' as a genre? Maybe you could.
The layout's fine
ML might make it divine.

Well, I'll end my review
Do give the *Cat2* a hello mew.


- Sonali



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