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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE INFORMATIVE WRITING

This is a small introduction to the chakras. It's said all humans have chakras, but unless one goes out of his/her way to learn about them, they are unknown.


*Smile*WHAT I LIKED
This is a nice introductory to the chakras.

*Star*1ST 3 LINES

The first two lines set up the list of chakras. The 3rd talks about the health chakra.

*Star*MECHANICS & SOUND

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

My suggestion would be to flesh out the information a tad more. Maybe explain a bit what the health chakra is, where it is found, and how you can nurture it. I think that would expand the reader's knowledge and curiosity a bit more.

Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army.
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