My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE INFORMATIVE WRITING This is a small introduction to the chakras. It's said all humans have chakras, but unless one goes out of his/her way to learn about them, they are unknown. WHAT I LIKED This is a nice introductory to the chakras. 1ST 3 LINES The first two lines set up the list of chakras. The 3rd talks about the health chakra. MECHANICS & SOUND I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS My suggestion would be to flesh out the information a tad more. Maybe explain a bit what the health chakra is, where it is found, and how you can nurture it. I think that would expand the reader's knowledge and curiosity a bit more. Reviewed by StephB for the Angel Army. }
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