"AUGUST 2022 Reviews"  

This one showed up on Read and Review.

The title and brief description intrigued me. The genres work for the content.

When I first glimpsed the piece, I thought, "Oh this must be a work in progress, it's too short to be a finished piece!"

Then I read it and - yes! It's a finished piece! I thought it was a poem, but I see you've classified it as 'prose'. It works as either.

What a punch you pack in just a three lines! Wow! This is a powerful metaphor, perfectly evoking your title and brief description. The interpretations can be many - that the mind need not be affected no matter what the circumstances, that the earth isn't affected by the antics of its inhabitants - and a myriad others.

My suggestion would be for Writing ML. Font, size and centre, perhaps, to enhance the look of the piece.

Thanks for sharing this!
Write On!


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