Hallo!
This one showed up on Read and Review.

On looking at the title and brief description, I thought it would be a feel-good sort of song. On reading it, I found that you had gone deeper and not just talked of dancing but of the more serious aspects of life too. I wish I could hear it sung, because you seem to have some very unusual phrases that would probably sound great given the appropriate rhythm and pauses. Reading it through, some of them slowed me down and I had to read again. I'm not sure if I'm missing something or if a lot of the phrases are open to myriad interpretations.

Overall, I liked the whole song a lot. It's quite unconventional and meaningful in its own unique way.

My suggestion would be for genres, please pick one, two or three genres to give your lyrics more exposure on site. Also, there is one phrase I'd ask you to look at - you've said 'life has' maybe you'd like to say 'has life'.

Dance On!


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .