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Given: Jul 28, 2022 at 11:24pm
Length: 647 Characters |
638 w/o WritingML
The short story is very well written. It works as a Flash fiction piece but I feel it could easily be expanded to a much larger story. You capture the setting of lab and scientist testing his invention very well. I can feel the tension and pressure of John trying his best to get the invention working in front of the audience. It was a fun ending with reveal of the purpose of the product. I sympathize with John a lot in this. Things really go smoothly when you are presenting them for an audience. ^_^;
The title of the project and story is great choice. I like the biblical reference. Nicely done!
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