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Review #4665704
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 The Chosen One (298 words) Open in new Window. [E]
Daily Flash Fiction: Breaking the cycle
by LouLearning Author Icon
Review by KingsSideCastle Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I liked this. This was a sweet story. The situation is set up really well and its easy for the reader to follow what is happening and understand what was going on. I felt the tension of the interview sympathized with the lead character who was trying to adopt as she told her story. The segment involving the prospective mother answering how she thought a child should be treated was heartwarming. There are some great subtle to touches in this that were fun to see. I liked the distinction given when interviewer mentioned that "This would take awhile" that she was saying it unkindly. I gives her a more human touch to her rather than just an antagonist role. Also I liked the gentle moment where the husband comforted his wife as she struggled to discuss her background. It was very well written!

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